Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Log lines

Django unchained.

Original-


Death or despair reaps revenge, what happens when the defeated get another chance. Its time to get unchained.

Revised-

On the verge of a lifeless existence as a slave, Django has an opportunity to take his life back. But when faced with working next to the brutal white folk inflicting torture onto his fellow slaves, can he hide his roots in order to save his wife from a saddist Mississippi plantation owner?

Format from blake snyders turbo- charged log line. 

Beautiful scars 

At the hight of her career a georgeous model thinks she has it all. Until she gets caught in a fire, escaping with minor burns she is temporarily put into a burns unit. Now she must learn to look past what you see on the outside, and realise that beauty is more than skin-deep. 

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